Shanti Press publishes the most beautiful books and magazines. One of my flash vignettes appears in their latest issue of the Still Point Arts Quarterly. When I saw the call, I was immediately attracted to the road theme. My story is called Cocoon, and its more true than fiction. It gave me a warm feeling to write it.

 Word count:  320 

                                                  Cocoon						

At eleven, the boy was sullen, pummeled by the split, Daddy leaving, everything cleaved in

two. At times, slouching over his dinner plate, he wouldn’t even look up. I’d try to ask about his

science project, his soccer practice. He would spit out a one syllable response, before clearing his

dish with a clatter, and heading out to whack a ball against the garage door.

Sometimes, not knowing what else to do, I’d suggest a ride, and he’d get in the back seat, carrying

his anger with him like an ax. But as soon as we drove a short while, huddled in our little blue

Volkswagen, with our eyes focused straight ahead, we could each relax. And a kind of peace would

settle in around us, like a blanket, and the rhythmic thrum of the engine would cradle us.

And words would come. So many words.

Not sharp, splintery, metallic words, but soft, rounded, cottony words. Words about

missing things. About Christmas as it used to be. About our old tabby cat buried in the yard.

What did her bones look like now? How, at night, the house was too quiet.

Sometimes we’d just ride aimlessly, into the countryside, never sure where we’d end up.

Even our silences were different as we drove.

We’d pass the farm stand with the corn maze, the stubby pasture with the lone horse,

blanketed for winter. And we’d both know that we had just driven by these things

and seen them, and kind of loved them, and there was no need to say anything.

We’d keep driving, and with each mile, the landscape would offer up something new,

something different: a house with a turret, a bathtub lying in a field.

So many scenes skimming before our eyes, the road like a magician, now you see it, now you don’t.

Everything left behind as we traveled forward, even our own pain.

You can read here: http://shantiarts.co Under Fall 2025, click DOWNLOAD DIGITAL EDITION. Still Point Quarterly is beautifully edited and presented.

5 responses to “A short piece about mending a family”

  1. Hi Gabriella,This tugged

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  2. Sweetness! This gave me the feeling of processing grief from a place of safety to help reconcile the instability (and familiarity) of an ever-changing landscape.

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  3. Merci Gabriella, On ressens la peine du petit garçon mais aussi l’amour et la résilience la mère. On se sentait en sécurité dans l’auto. J’espère que ton été a bien été. Ici la vie est allé à 100 mille à l’heure jusqu’à mardi passé. On gardait les enfants de ma nièce pour la semaine et j’ai commencé à faire de la fièvre, ugh. Vendredi je suis allé voir mon doc, j’avais mal à l’aine mais j’en ai pas parlé. La fièvre a tombé hier mais maintenant j’ai une bosse et une partie de la jambe enflée. Ugh. J’attends 8h30 pour appeler et aller le voir. Ton histoire était tout doux pour moi ce matin, merci.

    Mary Ann Mccarron

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  4. I rode with you. Thank you dear Gabriella.

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  5. I can’t figure out how to read it. ElaineSent from my iPhone

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